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The American Dream by *DarkTheif:iconDarkTheif:



Wake up, roll out of bed.
Walk to the bathroom, brush the hair on your head.
Put on some clothes, walk down the stairs.
Look out the window, see the weather is fair.
Turn the corner to the kitchen, start cooking some eggs,
Bacon, and ham, while at your feet the dog begs.
Drop him a snack, because no one will see.
How much more perfect could your life be?
Now here she comes, the love of your life,
And she dissipates all of your stress, woes and strife.
Coffee in hand, she walks up to you,
Says “Good morning, dear”, you reply “Good morning” too.
Then you kiss her gently and hold her tight,
'Till you hear a sound coming from your right.
Peering over, there he stands,
Your six year old son, an aspiring man.
He rubs the sleep from his eyes and walks up to you,
And looks up at you with his eyes so blue.
He says “Good morning, dad,” and gives you a hug,
And into your arms he fits so snug.
So you smile to yourself and laugh,
Such a perfect life you have.
But soon you wake up, only to see
That what you have witnessed was only a dream.
©2009 *DarkTheif
:icondarktheif:

Author's Comments

Just a dream I had a little while back, thought I would share it, seeing as how I've been dead for a year XD. Hope you guys like it ^_^

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:iconelphaba-thropp:
This made me sad. I like it, but it made me sad. I think I need to think about it some more

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I'll surround you entirely in all of my love
I want to keep you safe, so sadness never comes your way again. ~Gackt- Arittake no Ai de
~ThroughTheRabbitHole
:icontolkien:
:icondarktheif:
D8 Oh noes! I didn't mean to make you sad, it's just a dream that I've had a few times. But I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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The art of love is largely the art of persistence.
:iconelphaba-thropp:
It didn't make me sad until the very end... I don't know. But I really do like it.

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I'll surround you entirely in all of my love
I want to keep you safe, so sadness never comes your way again. ~Gackt- Arittake no Ai de
~ThroughTheRabbitHole
:icontolkien:
:icondarktheif:
Well, that's how it ends every time XD But yeah, actually wrote this for my English class ^_~

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The art of love is largely the art of persistence.
:icondarkninja09:
Wow, you are extremely skilled at the poetry, you needs a medal! in line 13 you forgoted the N in and i think

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best site ever [link]
:icondarktheif:
well.....me be thankies you for the compliments, is gonna check mistake you say. Thankies!

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The art of love is largely the art of persistence.

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